One day, a new girl came to Georgetown Junior
High. Her name was Marley, and she is also wild and active. Wolves where her
favorite animal; she lives on a farm too. Soothing, calm waters of the ocean is
where she loves to collect seashells as a hobby. One day, she showed up to
school all sad, and no one could figure out why she was not excited and
exuberant as always. After a few hours of school, everyone found out that
some immature boys in her grade were picking on her and not being so nice. She
didn't let it bother her like usually, until someone said that she should lose
the farm act and be normal like all the other girls. So, after school her
friends, girls and guys, took her out to eat at the kebab cafe in town. Still,
that did not cheer her up at all, and they tried their hardest, so they went
skiing next, because Marley loves skiing. As it did before it did not cheer her
up. So, they all went to get their nails done, even the boys to see if they
could get her to laugh. Just as they tried other things before it did not work.
They all had to go home, and they all hoped she would be better by the next
day. The girls had a Basketball the game next day, and Marley plays on the
basketball team. She played as good as she usually does and hitting her threes
like she does on her good days. They took home the win, but at the end of the game she
still never smiled or even seemed happy. The next day she came back as her
usually self. Happy, Energetic like usually, and no one knew why. Then, it
started spreading around that her crush asked her out and she said yes. The day
of her being happy again, her boyfriend took her out to get ice cream. For
a very long time she stayed herself and never let anything bother her again,
because her boyfriend took care of the boys that were jerks to her.
Carly,
ReplyDeleteI like how you added lots of details to your story even though there weren't lots of emojis in the story starter. You have a good imagination and I can hear your voice in your writing. It sounds like you like basketball, too. Do you play on a basketball team? I hope you're enjoying the blogging challenge. Keep up the good work!
Regards,
Mrs. Bentley from Georgia
I've enjoyed your story, Carly. Is it a bit autobiographical?
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